JEMAIL: Delaney, Gerard M. (MC1975) objects to headline

Re: MNEWS: MC draw prospective buyers?

John,

Your headline on the Fieldstone article is a little … shall we say …  slanted. I feared that the Brothers were looking to liquidate their investment in the college. Not that the private elementary/high schools were attractive to home buyers in the Fieldstone neighborhood.

Gerard M. Delaney ’75

Nollaig Shona
(Merry Christmas!)

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[JR: OK, I reread it and can see, now, a different meaning. "MC draw prospective buyers?" could have been "MC draws prospective buyers? or "MC is a draw to prospective buyers?" Hmmm, maybe I'm getting better at writing "suck people into reading headlines"? Sorry to scare you. Besides, who'd want to buy a small college? The Moonies, The Scientologists, The NBA! Thanks for the feedback and I'll try to do better. And, I hope you had a merry and we all have Peace in the new year. 2012 HAS to be better than 2011 for me. ]

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